Children In The Garden Of Eden Comments

A marvellous poem...

OUTSTANDING! Great flow of honest feeling in this, love, passion, brutality, spirituality. Grand use of imagery and metaphor. Good work poet. These polarities arise and the flow moves from love to fear to hate to love again. As a wrestling of the forces of emotion attached to the forces of good and evil. Perhaps its the subject of this piece which can only exist within the context. There is something Kaballah in the inspiration of 'Adam' sensing the coming of a messiah and it could be Typhon breaking forth from the side of his mother. Why? Because before the apostles there was only the Tora. Is this insight or merely the fact of the two books being known? This is a very thought provoking piece.