Thursday, May 5, 2011

Clearly A Winter Thought Comments

Rating: 3.5

icicles dig into my thickest vain
burst open at midnight on cold and candle lit cement
then the blood gushes out
voices above me 'get down on your knees' echo's in waves
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Radek Ozog
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 May 2011

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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