lyxo lyxo


Close Your Mind, Listen - Poem by lyxo lyxo

Times to times, we feel
Who is acting real
Now or later, as human being
For sure, we all know its ending

It is not a must to be sad
Day by day, we don’t go mad
We live like no tomorrow
Just enough to keep it slow

History and records
Show hate but support
Blood, death and illness
Facts going endless

Set to be free
Beg lord to be
No one’s your guide
Choose the right side

So much are hard to chase
Tell you wrong, it’s a race
Win others with everything else
But lost the soul against yourself.


Comments about Close Your Mind, Listen by lyxo lyxo

  • (2/4/2010 2:23:00 AM)


    In this piece there are irregular rhyme I noticed. Though unintentional, at least it didn't break the flow of the verses. If you check it out you can easily see these words. I think it's in the second stanza and the last one. Just keep writing. (Report) Reply

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  • Louis Rams (1/27/2010 7:33:00 PM)


    the lord has given us free will to keep our minds from standing still..
    gr8888t write a ten
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 27, 2010



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