Cloud 9 Or 6? Poem by Kevin Patrick

Cloud 9 Or 6?

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I'm on cloud nine
your on cloud six
we share a high
with different kicks


strap in hold tight
we're heading downtown tonight
my left, your right
its all a pleasing eyesight


locked in tour teeth
its like a vice
choked to the cheek
rosy and nice


Riding first class
with enviable perks
all bells and brass
and lock jawed smirks






Bodies burst
jet propulsion
traveling fast
skin compulsion

Thursday, January 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: inner peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 16 January 2019

'my left, your right its all a pleasing eyesight' - nice! The last stanza is truly a fitting climax to the poem!

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