Coffee For You Comments

Rodney, this is a good idea....'I am a...cup of coffee.' I would either choose to be talking to the lover in every stanza, as left behind by you...rather than by a lover...or make the whole thing impersonal. The last stanza goes to 'you' and then it becomes suddenly personal. That was bothersome to me. Still though, your subject is creative and I want to read more of your poetry. Raynette