Saturday, May 9, 2009

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The coldness is back in my veins,
As cold as a lonely desert,
The icy chill around my soul,
I can’t carry on, I back where I belong,
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Viola Grey 09 May 2009

this is kind of interesting....there is still a desire in there to live the experience that is life, yet you write as if giving up...why walk away when there is still so much to say...I quite like this piece...nice work.

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