Cold as snow,
my heart sits aimlessly,
beating,
beating for what?
beating for who?
why?
Cold as snow,
I lay dying.
I love it! Its so simple but the ideas and messages behind it can be perceived as quite complicated. Its concise and to the point! I think its brilliant!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brilliant. you said so little, yet it meant so much. your friend, dol iain. x