Cold As Snow Poem by Nicole Eleanor Wicks

Cold As Snow

Rating: 4.5


Cold as snow,
my heart sits aimlessly,
beating,
beating for what?
beating for who?
why?
Cold as snow,
I lay dying.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fleance Candide 21 February 2010

Brilliant. you said so little, yet it meant so much. your friend, dol iain. x

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Rachael Curtis 20 February 2010

I love it! Its so simple but the ideas and messages behind it can be perceived as quite complicated. Its concise and to the point! I think its brilliant!

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