Cold Is A State Of Mind Poem by Jhon hagwood

Cold Is A State Of Mind



If it's cold and your outside,

that's when my eye's begin too cry.

And that's when Istart too tell myself,

"how warm it is outside.

Wednesday, January 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
George Krokos 03 January 2018

I think this is not well written and should be corrected to read as given below whether you're referring to someone else or not : If it's cold and you're outside, that's when my eyes begin to cry. And that's when I start to tell myself, how warm it is outside.

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