Come In Poem by aida melesse

Come In

Rating: 2.8


That thing
that can't go away
that earning
that hopes for a better day,
That fantasy
that's free from the mind
that longing
that waits for your love.

Are you coming?
are you half way?
I am waiting
by the doorway...
then you knock
when I have given up
gone inside
and locked the door.
I hear your voice
calling...
but can't let you in,
I feel your breath
in the stillness you bring
still can't let you in.
Me in my empty room
You standing at my door
waiting...
I know you are still there
Don't wait for me
to let you in
just come in
and find yourself a sit
a place
I am not hospitable
when you know my weakness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Carney 04 August 2010

Very nice write, flow is good and really like this. Great line (I am not hospitable when you know my weakness) .

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