Sunday, October 1, 2006

Comfortable Silence (21st January 2006) Comments

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The freezing wind rips raw through my skin.
The sand supports my heavy form
And I couldn’t wait to take the plunge.
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Sarah Capella Smith
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pete rigs 04 October 2006

Shorter than most of your others but straight to the point! I really liked this, good job. :)

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Prasanna Kumari 01 October 2006

silence which is unbearable many times is converted into comfortable silence....... the last stanza is striking especially.

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