Monday, July 11, 2005

Commandment No.5 Comments

Rating: 4.3

My father is a stranger to me
He never turns-up uninvited
Sitting cautiously on the sofa
Genteel.
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Ben Barton
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Anna Russell 27 December 2006

This one really struck a chord with me (classic daddy issues!) . Well written with no wasted words. But Ben, he does love you, I'd put money on it. Hugs Anna xxx

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Ernestine Northover 10 June 2006

Maybe you have to make all the moves Ben. Sometimes age takes you out of the familiar and puts you into future time which isn't compatible with your known existence. One must make allowances I'm afraid. We all grow old in time. Good write here. Love Ernestine XXX

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Linda Preston 18 July 2005

Some interesting thoughts here, Ben.

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