Commit Poem by Loi O'Brien

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Looking into a soul that was staring back
My mind contemplated whether or not
Sanctifying the union was even necessary
As I knew more than he of his own self
Its wants, its whys, and soon its hows
With trembling breath I plunged
Marking what was mine

Thursday, February 27, 2014
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