Comparison - Tanka Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

Comparison - Tanka

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comparison - TANKA
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red bush in garden,

on a brightly green background,

it looks like ginger.

as the wig of the neighbour.

only he, has colour bronze.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 17 August 2009

Very good tanka, very good writting. I like it.

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