Addiction Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

Addiction

Rating: 2.9


you are defenceless
when it is stopping on your road
doesn't let go

as the intruder

it is sneaking in the life
in order to destroy it
is taking the power over you

is showing the countenance of the tyrant
is opening the door to world
perdition and distraction saying

come, I will introduce
my friends to you
it is a gambling, drugs, alcohol...


other world


gradually you more and more
often taste its charm
losing on the way, remnants of


humanity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

How we get addicted is explained poetically. Very good.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 19 November 2017

Yeah true addiction is something which always intrudes but on our will

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Ian Bowen 15 September 2009

I have given this a 6/10, and have copied the page. Please do not change it into a 10/10... like you do with all the others.

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James Mclain 21 June 2009

Roads rivers oceans voice on top beneath the bottom prays your voice holding choice..it rises in a bubble calling softly..it rides on your tounge...iip

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