Complain Poem by briangela jones

Complain



complaining seems like some we so good at
then defeat the fact
of just have a change of heart
everything isnt always go be easy
but hard so that later it will be a breeze
understand when you listen to what the
'they say' your letting them defeat your purpose
go by what you believe is right
and see what is all worth
because in the end you go prove them wrong
trust you are not alone
its plenty of people who has it hard
but they dont let it tare them apart
they just make changes
what i saying is if
we just stop complain about it
but try and change it
it will turn out good for the better
the god what you doing
he see the path your choosen
not everything coming agenst you
to break you
but make you
stronger
what im saying is
we so good at just sitting and complain
sure we in pain
in this great depression pt 2
but if you
just try a bit harder
see things things in different way
things will change
you speak depression on yourself
you will get depressing news
but speak of happyness
and see to it you will be bless
i say this
because i complain alot
and all its got
me is not
having what i really need
but when i made change
i saw how things
got better for me
so dont let the 'they says'
be right prove them wrong
cause when its all said and done
you will be having fun while they
wish that they never spoke doubt
on you cause now
they're proud of you
so please stop complaining
make some changes
dont listen to what they say
listin to what god has to say

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tiffany Channell 01 November 2009

A little hard to follow. Have you ever thought of shrinking your poems down.

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