Complaint Poem by somebody else

Complaint

Rating: 5.0


Really seems as if life, is a constant struggle,
and everyday is added, a new problem to juggle.
Just sailing through it all, in an endless typhoon,
seeming all time spent, is just howling at the moon.
And I am no beggar, and do want to earn my keep,
but it really does seem, that the cost is too steep
And I know whiners, are not liked by anyone,
but come on already, or has life just run out of fun.
It is said in the challenge, does the prize remain,
but attempting to reach, is an absolute strain.
And although told in hard work, a reward will be,
if it is just a little rest, that would indeed suit me.
For I do not want fortune, and I don't need fame,
and surely don't want the world, to know my name.
I really am content, to be just this dropp in this sea,
but I feel a prisoner, and I cannot break free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 21 August 2009

a silent musing....soft...with a unique contentment...and desire. loved this poem. thank you.

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Kayla Mclendon 07 August 2009

very cool i like dis poem

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jko gug 07 August 2009

This Poem Is Grreat Good Write,

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