Friday, February 16, 2018

Complicated Comments

Rating: 0.0

You're in my every thought and prayer
All things with you I want to share
In dark times and in light
Everything with you just seems right
...
Read full text

Mary Rodriguez
COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 20 March 2018

the title drew me to the poem. :)

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 20 March 2018

i wonder. where is he/she going? ? ? ? military? prison? to take care of pressing family matters in another part of the country/world? ? ? i like the poem. it reads very well. to MyPoemList. but i think lie is preferred to lay in this: Brighter days lay ahead. even i have sometimes not been sure which form of lie or lay to use. bri :)

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success