Compromizing Fate Poem by Ricardo Louw

Compromizing Fate



One, two, three...
How can this be.
In a quick count,
your not here with me.

Tomorrow seems so far away,
Now that we have gone our own way.
Yesterday feels so long ago.
It's as if life is moving slow.

Amazed i stand hipnotized
with a face that's suprized.
That you left without a compromise.
Amazed i stand hipnotizes

A mind trying to except our fate
A heart crying out for another date
A turn, a gaze, a sorry smile goodbye.
That's how she left me...
She left me to die.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Krupa ... 25 June 2008

Your poems are too good.

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Ricardo Louw

Ricardo Louw

East London, South Africa
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