Confined As A Prisoner Poem by Kiki Marie

Confined As A Prisoner

Rating: 5.0


i'm confined as a prisoner in my own head.
Forced to listen to these reoccuring thoughts.
Repeating over and over that i'm worthless.
Reminding me of how much of a screw up i really am.
Slowing losing my ability to fight back.
Grabbing ahold of me so tight...
...That i finally agree that they are right.
Knowing that i am worthless gets to me.
And i just want to end it all.
No one will miss me any way.
So why not just end the pain?
All the voices seem to agree.


[authors note: im not really planning to end anything. not suicidal. just getting out feelings.]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kaila George 08 June 2012

Anyone that writes like you do is not worthless, people have thier own opions thats their problem not yours, if you think you want to take your life, then our world would miss a Poet whos insight into human fallacys will be morned, I say go for your dreams, make those who think that to eat their words, grins sorry Im a tad anti...worthless here concerding I've heard the same things all my life.

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sky dreams 24 April 2009

i'm a prisoner in my own head too.. this poem forces the reader to see what they may not want to.. good write and by the way.. you are not worthless

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Raging Fire 22 February 2009

hun, you are not a screw up and your not worthless! ! i love you and i know life gets hard! i've been through a lot too and i've felt this way but you just have to get through it! ! i'm here when u need me and i hope you know that!

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