Confused Poem by Nicole Gehrman

Confused

Rating: 5.0


I used to be so inspired.
But can't seem to find what to say.
I'm confused
and these feelings r pushing me over the edge.
I cant even write one setence down with feelings.
They are all numbed,
So much has happened i have pushed
them all to the back of my head.
So no one knows what im feeling.
Im scared for what will happen if i
Keep all these feelings bottled up inside.
All they are is just words
but they have to mean something.
Dont they?
Im worried for what will become of me.
Just wish i could end this pain.
And maybe it will all go away
Someday.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kellie Imer 15 October 2009

You remind me so much of myself..I used to feel so lost and confused. I don't think the confused part ever really goes away but you will find yourself and be truly happy someday. When you are stuck at home and miserable you can't really experience life, so Hold on it will be okay. Life is a crazy ride but it has so many amazing moments ones that can never be replaced. You are a amazing poet, I hope you keep writing. :)

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Joseph Skytta 13 October 2009

very impressive, showing emotions by writing about the lack of emotions is a very poetic justice. I like this one very much.10 out of 10.

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Sans Serif 12 October 2009

Emotions are the just reason for the beauty of poetry. If you do not release them you will never find the right words for poetry.

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Nicole Gehrman

Nicole Gehrman

Colfax, Wisconsin
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