Friday, June 24, 2011

Confused Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't know if I want to slam my fist in to the wall or slide down it crying.

I don't know whether to run or hide from the darkness
Or just lay there and let it consume me.
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Evelyn Knight
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 24 June 2011

Outstanding poem. Wonderfully conceived. Great imagery with nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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