</>The confusion that I feel
Is so great it's almost real
It's been making me want to scream
Though I know it's just a dream
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I like your vivid dream. Flows beautifully. I think if you were woken up you would want to hurry and get back to finish it.
It's been making me want to scream Though I know it's just a dream these lines are my favorite...great idea well put in words