Confusion Poem by ashley akin

Confusion

Rating: 5.0


My mind is black and jumbled with thoughts

I just want to cry alone and not be caught

I dont feel like life is real

It's all make believe like one moment it will all disappear.



Why cant life be the way you want

You try and try but its all for naught

In life you try to trust

I feel that once again that has turned to dust



I feel the tears fall down my cheeks

I bow my head down where my tears fall to my feet.

Why do i do this to myself?

Frustration and anger is all i have felt



As i can see nothing has changed

It's to late the blackness came

That's why i feel the tears fall down my cheeks

And i bow my head down where my tears fall to my feet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009

The state of confusion is indeed very strange and can creep inside your mind and soul with so much power that you loose the visionary flow of your contemplations and disrrupt your paths......yet self assessment becomes mandatory in such situations to avoid the futuristic complexities.........10/10

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