Conscience Poem by Julie Neises

Conscience

Rating: 3.5


Night

The sky caves in.
Pressure from above,
getting too strong.

Constellations mock.
Bring memories long past.
Familliar faces stare down.

Actions remain,
never to be undone.
Never.

Thoughts stir.
One particular thought,
dominates all others.

Guilt

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stone Granite 20 May 2008

What a great piece. Reconcile the guilt you speak of and move past the guilt inducing memory that visits you on those nights. Release it.

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Kye Kurion 02 May 2008

You brought good emotion, I think you did well.

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