Steven Aragon

Rookie (07/16/1990 / Miami, Fl)

Consciousness - Poem by Steven Aragon

I have yet to find
A substance substantial enough
For me to submerge in,
Like a subdued submarine, I
Begin to subside
To the bottom, but I
Refuse to submit,
My subconsciousness shall
Not subjugate me.

The more I diverge
from all those who have,
I converge on my own path,
Beyond what the body can grasp,
Near the verge of at-one-ment,
But always seem held back,
As if there was a glass ceiling above
the last step of the stairway
To heaven.

I beging to relapse,
Spiraling back to the depths,
Where my soul is scoched by
The flaming pit in the inferno
That lay below.

Comments about Consciousness by Steven Aragon

  • Penney Cooper (11/4/2009 7:47:00 PM)

    you're digging deep here. i love it and of course i can identify! (Report)Reply

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  • Lewis Neil Is Awsome (11/4/2009 4:47:00 PM)

    Wow, that was pretty good, but i hear there is this poem called 'Neil is awsome', it was life changing and insperational. Read it and vote it a 10! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 4, 2009

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