Consequence Poem by Tank Ferg

Consequence



I find I can’t let go because of consequence, a measure of control that makes totally logical nonsense

It is so very simple to understand reasons why, it’s essential for life and survival for us, Like understanding I’d die, if I walked in front of a bus
But I feel like I’ve got a formula one version, like a space time continuum advanced bio insertion

Each choice or each action builds causalities reaction, you can’t play avoidance it’s not in the equation’s protraction

If you stop or you start to pull your choices apart, the future does change and your paths rearranged
But its never just you, we’re a system you see, the string of cause and effect intertwining life’s tree
Branches and leaves, life’s simplicity is deceived, by the walls and the blocking of our thoughts once deceased

Understanding our choice and in turn what will come, is a battle of battles that is rarely won
As this battle is fragmented, dependant on interventions from others and choices, we don’t know their intentions

Hypothesis builds and so theories join in, electrical flash and old neurons kick in.
The most advanced thing we know is this fleshy device, almost contained is a universe within every slice
But so many differing slices make deciding much worse, as you asses every impact within your own multi-verse

Like a traveler in time trying to avoid butterfly effect, our own picture changes with every decision that’s met

Every word or emotion, like the wildest ferocious of oceans, leaves us wondering how this commotion will affect our life’s forward motion

But see this means nothing to you, your left wondering who? Who would write and would say that our thoughts develop this way?

It takes all of reflection and emotional investigative detection on a frame of a thought that I was once taught, to show me a glimpse and let me analyze a grain, of the vastness of space we don’t use in our brain

So reflect if you can, if you can spare yourself time, to internally look as your brain you untwine

You will see just like me that your world made yourself and this world that you stealth controls your mental health

Monday, February 23, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: nonsense,battles,branches,butterfly,deceased,leaves,oceans
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Your poem contains some very long lines.It's like reading a series of paragraghs rather than poetry format-even freeform poetry has it's rules-it has to look like a poem.You have really profound ideas that are clearly written and thought out...very thought provoking.I'm going to give you a ten mostly for inspiration and clarity....good work! ! ! ! If you get a chance please read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKU and welcome to POEMHUNTER! ! ! ! ! !

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