Monday, April 2, 2012

Consume Me Comments

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When the tide is crashing
And the sun recedes
The shadow comes slashing
For the blood that feeds
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Sean Skinner (The Affection and Abandonment Excerpt, pt. 1)
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Arkady Dolgoruky 15 September 2014

Very interesting choice of words. Rhyme does not destroy the essence of the poem either. Well done.

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Ramesh Rai 10 April 2012

your plea is right. a nice poem.

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