Controll Me Not.. Poem by becca hansen

Controll Me Not..



i needed you
my world revolved around you
you were everything i wanted and more

but then you left me
and now your beggin me
but i just cant not carry this anymore

no i will not be controlled by a man
i dont need you to hold my hand
im doing fine on my own
i think its your turn to sinnk in the sand
its time for you to understand
im fine all alone..

you were really great
someone i lovede to date
but the problem was, you would never listen
you told me our love true
boy, i wanted to beleive you
and now your telling me i dont know what im missing

no i will not be controlled by a man
i dont need you to hold my hand
im doing fine on my own
i think its your turn to sinnk in the sand
its time for you to understand
im fine all alone..

i had some fun
but your not the one
im not your toy
and your not my boy
i want to stay
but dont want to play
just let me be
oh why cant you see...? ? ? ?

that i will not be controlled by a man
dont you dare try to hold me hand
i will get by on my own
i hope that you understand
if you dont, then i deman
its time for you to leave..

..me alone



[written 8.18.08]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Hansen 26 August 2008

Good Girl Becca great words! ! ! ! I've enjoyed reading your poems Thanks! ! ! !

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