Wednesday, November 22, 2006

Could I Have That To Go? Comments

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Her steam starched, water whitened, raw reddened hands
smelled of bluefish and clean pots hot and drying.
One hip cocked, unwantonly saucy,
her pen approaches pad as though taper to votive candle.
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Glenn Latal
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Howard Savage 16 September 2016

Great poem with profound metaphors and fortified emotions, of the true reality.

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Francesca Johnson 23 November 2006

Brilliantly written. A keen eye for detail. You've painted a picture with the minutest brush strokes, and the canvas is full... Love, Fran xx

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