This is very good, Justin. Your hard work is paying off. You need to make 'with in' one word, as 'within.' The following word is spelled wrong: 'strenght.' Please look it up. You can leave off the last line entirely, because it does not add to the poem.
Otherwise I enjoyed reading this.
Keep on studying.
alicia
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This is very good, Justin. Your hard work is paying off. You need to make 'with in' one word, as 'within.' The following word is spelled wrong: 'strenght.' Please look it up. You can leave off the last line entirely, because it does not add to the poem. Otherwise I enjoyed reading this. Keep on studying. alicia