Crack In The Ceiling Poem by ives vanhouche

Crack In The Ceiling

Dazzling figure
devilish design
turning
a human creature
into a head
missing a spine.

Ravishing eyes
diving deep
into mine
destroying all
that's decent
and fine.

Trembling grounds...
poppies awakened
lust and desire
hidden
under a blanket
spread by
a local friar.

Black queen toppled white king
values
bend the knee
morals
shrank shamefully.

Submission
strangled selfesteem
mourning twins
pride and dignity
fearfully
fled the scene...


Crack in the ceiling
ravishing eyes
patiently waiting
for my inevitable
demise.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I see love as a destructive force. The man lays on his hospital bed looking at the ceiling. The crack represents his memory opening. How did he get here dying? Love stripped him of all that defined him and at the end there was nothing left beside his dying corps. As love is destructive it is also highly addictif. The man probably would surrender to it again. Black queen toppled... (chess) - trembling grounds => his world was trembling => poppies flowers arise, come out if the ground trembles (flanders battleground) => as the poppies (metafore for lust and...) arose so did also lust and.... under a blanket of dust... (he grew up in a small very religuous village in England) .
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