Creative Purgatory Afore The Advent Poem by Oni Hayes

Creative Purgatory Afore The Advent



Trapped in a creative purgatory, I strive to survive
As one magnificent manufacture is constructed
The others escape fertilization

Ink, paint, pencil none
Hands disconnect from the mind
Portrayed on the naked paper

Disenchant aroused, I strive to survive
Perplexities take place of vanity
Any stroke seems insignificant

Waiting for a advent of ingenuity
Periods of imagination cultivate the day
Yet none speak any warmth

Saturday, March 3, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: creative,trapped
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stug Jordan 19 March 2007

Second stanza stands out, being the only one with some clever, physical imagery. As for the subject, I know how you feel. More imagery, scattered randomly or unexpectedly, would suit your style very well.

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Oni Hayes

Oni Hayes

Long Island, New York
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