Creative Purgatory Afore The Advent Poem by Oni Hayes

Creative Purgatory Afore The Advent



Trapped in a creative purgatory, I strive to survive
As one magnificent manufacture is constructed
The others escape fertilization

Ink, paint, pencil none
Hands disconnect from the mind
Portrayed on the naked paper

Disenchant aroused, I strive to survive
Perplexities take place of vanity
Any stroke seems insignificant

Waiting for a advent of ingenuity
Periods of imagination cultivate the day
Yet none speak any warmth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stug Jordan 19 March 2007

Second stanza stands out, being the only one with some clever, physical imagery. As for the subject, I know how you feel. More imagery, scattered randomly or unexpectedly, would suit your style very well.

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Oni Hayes

Oni Hayes

Long Island, New York
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