Thursday, November 1, 2012

Crickets Lullaby Comments

Rating: 4.8

the night is cute and mute
from my parent's fight and feud
but the sound constantly chirps
from leafy summer's crickets
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 01 November 2012

the first two lines are shocking! Parents have never realized how their children would feel while they fought! but a poetic mind is at work! Nice!

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Ravangla, south sikkim, india
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