Friday, May 13, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

And the dragon hides in bloated clouds
that bind the hills in skeins of grey.
She bides her time till break of day
to free her land from jealous shrouds.
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Hazel Buckingham
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Hribhu Dey 13 May 2011

u have musicalised...nice pace..keep up ur poems made nice reading...excellent composition...i loved reading ur poem..plz read my poem I AM A PROLETARIAT and leave a comment plz

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 May 2011

Great poem having a lot of music. Remarkable imagery with plenty of wisdom. Wonderfully written. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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