Crushes Poem by Kevin Eaglesfield

Crushes

Rating: 4.8


If your crush said to my crush,
'Let's meet and have a chat',
We'd be reduced to atoms,
And the Earth would be razed flat.

Poles would flip, the oceans boil,
The moon bounce like a ball,
Mountains crack if we released
The things we hold in thrall.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 17 September 2009

Poles would flip, the oceans boil, Rachel Ann Butler

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Fay Slimm 27 November 2008

There's always an unexepected quirk to your writing Kev. and it is so attractive. The reader never quite knows what's coming next...... great read and 10 for this...from Fay.

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