Cry Poem by Miranda Van Yperen

Cry

Rating: 5.0


I cry at night
When I'm all alone

there's nothing I can do
My life is lifeless

I've got nothing to live for
No one to live for

I can't keep breathing
my life's a big mess

I act like I'm fine
but I'm falling apart

tears leak out
fall to the floor

I feel like no one
could truly understand

because my life got up
and walked out the door

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Beatriz Luna 04 September 2009

I can so understand this poem. And i agree with the other review, you are a very talented poet for your age.

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masked lady 27 August 2009

Miranda, at your age, you write so well. Keep on writing, I know, soon you'll be a very good poet. GOD BLESS! Please find time to read my poems, and vote too. Thanks

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