Crying Soul Poem by Allison Unknown

Crying Soul



My soul
Is crying out
For someone to help it
It cannot take
Anymore of the pain
It has dealt with
For so many years
Every night
It cries
From all the pain
People put on it
They do not understand
How much it hurts
If only
They were in my shoes
How would they deal with it
Would they be perfectly fine with it
Or would it drive them insane
I dont know
Lets see how you do
Inside these shoes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lushan Marie 24 November 2009

This is my favourite so far. :)

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I think if anyone was in your shoes, they'd probably fall flat on their face. I hope you keep fighting through the pain, even though it probably seems unbareable. I love how you wrote straight from the pain, like the cries are coming out of the poem.

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