Friday, February 6, 2009

Daddy Gave His Little Girl The Blue's Comments

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I always looked up to my dad
I thought my dad was the coolest, smoothest dad ever
I like for my dad to come to my school and pick me up
And all of my homegirls use to ask me who is that
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Lailoni Marie
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Greenwolfe 1962 10 February 2009

This one really hurts. This is pretty bad. I hate to read this kind of thing. It undercuts one of the great relationships as I see it. The one between a father and a daughter. This was well written. A good structure as well. A great ending that sealed the deal. Wonderful! GW62

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