Saturday, September 13, 2008

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My daddy likes to drink beer,
he likes to drink it when hes playing his game top gear,
but sometimes when he looses,
he abuses,
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Mikaiila .S.
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Barbara Terry 13 September 2008

Ok I am really lost in this. Why is the door locked, and why is he banging on the door and shouting? And where is your mother? The surrealness of this poem gives the reader a haunting shiver that all is not well in in the home, and that there is abuse permeating the fear of letting him in. Am I right? Anyway, why are you dressed up as a fairy? Even though this poem asks questions, it is written with emotional feelings from the heart and dictated by the soul. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, Barbara

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