Shaun Shane

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Daffodil - Poem by Shaun Shane

take a daffodil
and pop
the flower
and hold it
in your hand
then squeeze
and unfurl your fist
seeing only
the mangled mess



beauty is so easy
to destroy
with willful force


be careful

Topic(s) of this poem: Beauty


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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/24/2014 6:29:00 AM)


    Beautifully expressed the cruelty in love- plucking a flower is to playing love with its freedom (Report) Reply

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  • Yash Shinde (10/23/2012 2:21:00 AM)


    tells how fragile beauty is. it is so difficult to preserve it.loved this one (Report) Reply

  • (7/5/2012 11:40:00 AM)


    Beauty is our most treasured and fragile thing. Go to Google, search The Truth Contest, click the first result, begin reading The Present (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (5/8/2012 5:36:00 AM)


    This is wonderful, so very insightful and of course, true - beauty is so easy to destroy. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 23, 2014


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