Danny's Laptop Case Poem by Jordan Kassis

Danny's Laptop Case

Rating: 4.1


Danny's laptop case is strong,
His computer is weak,
The laptop case can bare quite a weight,
It protects what it holds dear,
But if it holds too much,
It will eventually disappear,
This cannot be helped,
It cannot hold the world.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Keppel 10 March 2013

i would of given it a 4 if you added maybe a goat or a new zealander but sorry you didn't

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