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I'm not afraid of flames
cause your body is like an everlasting fire.
What scares me is that one day
Your eyes can become like ice.
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Mike's got it right. This poem has genuine emotion and I found it very moving. Tom Billsborough Ps I think we have a fine new poet here. More please!
I've never been a big fan of romance poetry, mostly because a good number of them are just so wishy-washy. Your poem however, does not meet that description at all. You've embodied romance and trust without coming off as love drunk. A great poem. Welcome to PH by the way
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12/11/2025 1:38:47 AM # 1.0.0
Your compliments are great inspiration for me. Thank you!