Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Dark Heart Comments

Rating: 3.5

they sky is dark
and so is my heart
its like they split my heart in two
but ome day ill find some one better than you
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Christian Guice 07 April 2009

this is a nice short poem

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Alex Gomez 07 April 2009

A few spelling errors and such, but otherwise a pretty good little poem. Try to diversify your vocabulary.

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forever unknown 02 April 2009

it sucks.........J.K.

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