Darkness Poem by Angel Smith

Darkness



I'm swimming all alone in a pool of darkness
and I feel like darkness is slowly pulling me under
I yell for help but no one is there to hear it
I begin to see the water at eye level
and I kick and flail
fighting to stay above the darkness
But the darkness won't let go of its hold on me
and I slowly begin to give in
to the feeling that lies below the water line
the waters starts to fill my lungs
the lungs that once held so much life
yet now they allow the murky water to replace that
I know that this path doesn't lead to happiness
But why doesn't someone grab my hand
pull me from darkness's grasp?
because no one knows I stand at the boundary
the boundary between light and dark
so I give in to the thing that holds me
All of the strength and all of the courage
that I once held in my heart
can't save me from the water
So I slowly slip below the world of conscientiousness
undetected by the occupants of that world
I don't want to fight anymore
I've given into darkness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 07 January 2009

very nice. dark and deep poem. i loved it

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Luzaan De Bruyn 16 December 2008

A VERY DEEP POEM! ! YOU PAINT ME A PICTURE WITH YOUR WORDS AND ITS LIKE IM THERE WITH YOU.. FIGHTING THE DARKNESS.. MOST YOUNG PEOPLE FEEL LIKE THIS AND IF WE DONT FIGHT IT AND HELP THEM GET OUT THEN WE ARE JUST ANOTHER GIRL OR BOY.. I THINK THIS POEM CAN HELP PEOPLE.. IM SURE IT ALREADY DID

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