Darkness Poem by Elle Lazarus

Darkness



The rush, the power.
I can feel it pulsating from my core.
Time to fear, it is the hour,
for the monster inside to roar.
The adrenaline feels addictive.
The views are starting to fade.
my arms and legs feel restricted.
My body is losing to the darkness, the shade.
The blackness engulfs my body.
I exist as nobody.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 09 November 2008

Elle - Yes, it seems only in the darkness do we feel who we really are, 'pulsating from our core'..............Well written! Your friend - Cheryl

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I like the beat to this poem

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Elle Lazarus

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