Sunday, November 22, 2015

Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish this world of darkness would come to an end
I lost a girl, I lost a friend
I'd give it all back if I only could
I've said it a million times, I know I would
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Sanju Roy
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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 November 2015

Desperation by love lost or rejection is evident from each word of the poem. Thinking that such a situation means an end of life itself is wrong. One must take life in it's stride and forgetting the past one must allow life to move on. Renounce negative thoughts and adopt positive approach to lead a beautiful life waiting for you. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Sanju Roy 26 November 2015

Thank you

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