Tuesday, May 31, 2016

Darkness Beseeching Comments

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What's my cause of tribulation?
Am I coming to a revelation?
Concepts beseech me, befuddle me even,
Internal conflicts with the demon.
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Ryan Bellardini
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Chinedu Dike 02 June 2016

Beautiful poem that depicts power of mighty spiritual experience that is love, insightfully penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Ryan.

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Rajnish Manga 31 May 2016

Excellent portrayal of the poet's resolve to wriggle out of a daunting situation. Thanks. Ryan. Despair, anguish, heartache, and remorse / Will I ever steady my course / I call out for dawn to break / We will break through this night.

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