Darkness Within Comments

A big poem from you John, wow like a dark hand tries to kill you..maybe you have bright heart...if you keep it bright sure no dark will come and take that :) ..i like the each lines you written there, it has good meaning and digested easily to mind and to get understand..life is like a day, have sun n night with dark..as long as you know how to act you will be okay..sure next day will have sun to bright new hope..keep writing good poem! _Unwritten Soul