Dawning Of Morn Poem by Arthor Journer

Dawning Of Morn

Rating: 5.0


The song rings out once again inspiring my soul to sing
Not a song of pain and glory, but a sweet symphony
The hard downpour will nurture and reap bright flowers
Strands of web the wind will break before life sours
The past dirt flowing into the resurrected river
Dire thoughts lowing from my heart sifted through my liver
Cloud like curtains rolled back into the breadth of the sky
Wings remounted on my soul once again permitted to fly
Emotions pure and the will to create inspired and reborn
Eyes opened complete soul anxious for the dawning of morn
So many questions come to mind but trying not to mettle
So many thoughts that ring but my heart can’t be settled
Can her voice ignite the fuse in my soul?
Would her touch make my will loose control?
Where is the epicenter that has shaped my life?
What is the yearning to change her from woman to wife?
Who does her songs go to on a cold winter’s eve
When will the red lights be lit for those never to leave?
Could her eyes heal all the aching in my mind?
Should my heart become drunk from the life’s sweet wine?
How has her essence touched the very shores of me?
And her smile the only source of light that I can see

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R R 04 June 2008

Tangibly beautiful! The settings are slowly rolled out, like a big canvas with darkly shaded background. But the author’s thoughts are like leaping flames or swinging trees or shining beams, highlighting the environment with lively source. The tones between the background and the mind are harmoniously distinct. Yes, we all may ask ourselves many similar questions. Perhaps it is not easy to find the answers, but it is such questions that motivate us to pursue, to experience and to live. Well, not sure if I understand it correctly, but no doubt it is such a joy to read all those lines from you.

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Linda Ori 09 February 2008

Tough questions, and the reason that many never take that leap of faith. We have no guarantees - only faith that all our answers lie in that other entity. In truth, the answers lie within us, if we can just listen with our hearts. Still, a very unsettling place to be - balancing on the precipice. Brilliant piece of writing, Arthor. Linda :)

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