Saturday, February 9, 2008

Dawning Of Morn Comments

Rating: 5.0

The song rings out once again inspiring my soul to sing
Not a song of pain and glory, but a sweet symphony
The hard downpour will nurture and reap bright flowers
Strands of web the wind will break before life sours
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Arthor Journer
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R R 04 June 2008

Tangibly beautiful! The settings are slowly rolled out, like a big canvas with darkly shaded background. But the author’s thoughts are like leaping flames or swinging trees or shining beams, highlighting the environment with lively source. The tones between the background and the mind are harmoniously distinct. Yes, we all may ask ourselves many similar questions. Perhaps it is not easy to find the answers, but it is such questions that motivate us to pursue, to experience and to live. Well, not sure if I understand it correctly, but no doubt it is such a joy to read all those lines from you.

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Linda Ori 09 February 2008

Tough questions, and the reason that many never take that leap of faith. We have no guarantees - only faith that all our answers lie in that other entity. In truth, the answers lie within us, if we can just listen with our hearts. Still, a very unsettling place to be - balancing on the precipice. Brilliant piece of writing, Arthor. Linda :)

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